You need to know the rules to know how to break them with intention.
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Given Lemmy's demographic we can put it like this:
If you invent an entire programming language from first principles, you're probably pretty smart.
If you're in a a class at uni learning C++ and you submit code written in your new language, then you're going to fail
English prof up on a soapbox here.
Comments like "you have to learn the rules before you break them" are kind of missing the mark. For the most part, those of us who teach English/composition/literary criticism/etc aren't particularly concerned with "rules" (with the exception maybe of English as a second or foreign language, where conventions/rules are used to scaffold learning rather than as universal truths). English teachers are familiar with linguistics and the fluid, messy nature of language and all the fun things we can do with it. The "grammar Nazis" you encounter online are VERY unlikely to be English teachers (though they likely were our most insufferable students), who are often the first to point out that language is constantly changing and that what's considered "correct" depends heavily on ... everything, really.
But we're talking here, ostensibly, about a "class." And if we're talking about a class, we're talking about a syllabus. Specific outcomes on which a course is responsible for improving and checking proficiency. Your English class isn't necessarily about "learning English," especially if English is your first language. It's about getting you to become proficient at doing a specific selection of specific things with your language. Very often these things aren't even about rules or grammar, but that doesn't mean the expectations aren't strict- and what most people read as strictness is usually just specificity.
It's damn near impossible to know whether a curriculum, teacher, method, or activity is successful without an outcome to measure. Lack of specificity makes measurement difficult and potentially unfair. If you're told to "write a persuasive essay," what exactly does that mean? What separates an A from a C? How does the teacher justify that distinction, and how does the student know what they need to improve? Without very specific target structures or a "can do" inventory, assessment becomes messier and we leave students guessing about what an given teacher might want from them, which isn’t especially fair (or useful, from a pedagogical POV).
A teacher can understand perfectly well that language is flexible, that different contexts call for different kinds of language, and that conventions change over time, while still expecting students to demonstrate a particular skill according to given criteria. There isn’t one correct way to use English, but a class DOES needs to establish what it's trying to do, what students are expected to be able to do, and how anyone can tell whether they've been successful. That's not necessarily prescriptivism, it's just how a curriculum works.
And this is why I taught math.......
Math teachers also didn't like how I arrived at my answers. I made little games and rules to try and predict the solution in a roundabout way rather than just doing the calculations "straight."
And yeah it wasn't as effective as the students following direction, but I was definitely having the most fun.
I am all about having fun playing with numbers. I did have students like you. It could be a real effort sometimes to get them on the right path. But the reasons I wanted you on that path was because I was trying to teach you shortcuts to make doing The Math^tm^ easier.
If you are a kid sitting in my math class I will tell you that you already learned everything you needed to know about algebra, (geometry is something different and sometimes more wild and fun), when you learned how to add and subtract. Everything else you were being taught was just a short cut to make the maths faster and easier to do. So it's important to learn those shortcuts. Hey, mathematicians are nothing if not lazy. And we all want to be lazy mathematicians right?
I was also a little bit less concerned about getting the answer right than I was interested in teaching you to understand how you got that answer. Explain to me what steps did you take to get to the answer. If you can do that, that becomes an important skill in getting the right answer far more often than you will get a wrong answer.
And finally, and a point where I did cross into the world of "The English Teacher", insert your native language here please. Neat penmanship counts in math. It makes going back and seeing what you've done far, far easier. Boys, as a very general rule, struggle with this a lot. Not that girls can't also, they do. And as a member of the Bar Sinister, writing ain't meant for lefties - The Struggle is Real. But keeping your math writing in neat columns and rows goes a very long ways to making math so much easier. Once I could get those boys to slow down and be neat and orderly, they would often be amazed at just how good they actually were with math and how easy it became. They could often quickly elevate themselves from being a struggling D student to a B or even an A student just on hand writing alone.
So remember Kiddies, You can't blow things up until you learn the math!
The “grammar Nazis” you encounter online are VERY unlikely to be English teachers
Still too many of them on the fediverse for my tastes, though the number has definitely dwindled since I first got on a few years back. I wish we had enough people interested in grammar (read: descriptivists) to make an active grammar comm here but it's way too niche. I used to enjoy the discussions back on reddit but even over there it was still basically only a handful of people providing most of the answers that actually ended up leading to interesting conversations.
99.99% of all MF's that say some shit like "Yeah I got bad grades, but if they tested critical thinking then I would have cum loud or whatever"
Yeah ok brother. You couldn't critically think your way through a 3 page structured essay but I'm sure you were just holding back.
A young man asked Mozart how to write a symphony. Mozart replied, “You are too young to write a symphony.” The man said, “You were writing symphonies when you were 10 years of age.” Mozart said, “Yes, but I didn't ask how to do it.”
TLDR;; if you're a student then you're a student, if you disagree, don't ask, just do it and you will be recognized if your aim is true.
Novels are art. English teachers are not teaching you how to write as an art form. This is because our schools are designed to make good little worker bees. They are teaching you language so that you can then go on to learn technical writing. Now, I do think they should split the two apart, and let kids experiment and have fun with writing. That does not mean that they are wrong. Technical writing requires precision and a strict adherance to rules. It is the same concept as it being entirely fine to have a bit of fun when painting a mural, but not when you've been hired to paint someones house.
I think you kinda have to learn the rules and prove you know them before you go wild breaking them.
That's not always the case. Sometimes a writer is like Jimi Hendrix where there's no need for elaborate theory backing them because they can just straight up fucking play. But it's usually the case, and the overwhelming majority of teachers are teaching extremely usual people.
I remember in my one college-level creative writing class I had to read other people's work and it read like an eight year old wrote it.
now do music teachers
music teachers when you make a wrong note: 😡
Music teachers when jazz: 😍
That's actually a great example.
Back in the day, jazz records would have the jazz version of the song on Side A, and a non-jazz version on Side B.
To the people hearing jazz for the first time it sounded terrible, but after they realized the musicians knew what they were doing, many were won over.
no thanks they're not my type
It's almost like English teachers are supposed to teach traditional writing norms. You know, like, as their jobs or something ...
Students when English teacher get pregnant and she's off for this year. Again.
I'm gonna say it: Jack Kerouac sucks. I've read many different authors, but none have been as annoyingly unreadable as him. You're supposed to "ride the wave of his thoughts?". No thanks. To me, that just sounds like a vain excuse for bad writing.
You have to know the rules, why they exist, and what breaking them implies.
If you are in a class designed to teach the rules, it doesn't even matter if you already did all 3 steps. You'll fail the class because the class is testing if you CAN follow the rules.
But I signed up for a writing class not a following the rules class. Basically all classes are follow the rules classes if we are going to look at it like that
I guarantee your writing class has a syllabus. The problem here is a disconnect between what you think the syllabus says and what it actually says (this may not be your fault- a lot of teachers are notoriously shit at communicating the purpose of the syllabus).
Also:
English Teachers: "Lets now analyze and decode the deeper meaning the author meant in chapter 23 paragraph 6" Authors: "There was supposed to be a deeper meaning?"
Authors: “There was supposed to be a deeper meaning?”
English Teachers: “You are already dead"
Authors: “There was supposed to be a deeper meaning?”
English Teachers: “You are already dead"
Salman Rushdie: "I know that was figurative, but it still hurts!"
Salman Rushdie:"I support genocide and zionist fascism!"
English teacher: Omae wa mou shindeiru
Authors: Nani?!
Sometimes the curtains are just blue
I got smacked down so hard when I suggested that instead of identifying symbolism and metaphors in the writing we should be looking at the author's intent in the context of their time.
Author intent stops meaning anything outside the head of the author anyways. Individual perception is the only source of meaning. No one can understand a subject without the context of their culture and personal experiences. Hence why two people can interpret the same subject in different ways that are both valid.
That may sound overly reductionist, but that's genuinely what it boils down to. Someone's artistic intent could be pretending to be stupid to prove a point, but if the audience only sees a stupid person, the author has no control of the message.
In the context of they sorts of literary analysis done at the high school or early university level, there does end up being a right and a wrong. Maybe that's what turned me off to that sort of discussion: the downplaying of my experience with a work in favor of the "right" interpretation.
That’s because you can never know the author’s intent. That’s a very outdated (and very overdone) way of thinking about literature. It’s also one that we have realized isn’t actually very useful for the purposes of most literary analysis. While it can be useful to look at the historical conditions under which the text was produced (New Historicism), there is much more insight into what literature “means” when we look at aspects of the text itself such as symbolism and metaphor, because these aspects can evolve with the text and with time and with the reader, and this unfolds many more possibilities about ourselves and the work of art. There is certainly a place for combining New Historicism with other forms of literary analysis to use knowledge about the historical conditions to inform the interpretations of things like symbolism and allegory, but attempting to ascertain the author’s intentions is a futile endeavor that usually makes for a lackluster analysis.
You're obviously levels beyond me understanding and analyzing literature, and I defer to what sounds like your knowledgeable position. Maybe I always missed the point, maybe I had teachers who weren't that great, or maybe I am just not wired for it. Analyzing a fictional character's motivations seemed like asking why grass is motivated to be green.
Honest question: if I was interested in expanding my mind on this topic could you recommend some reading? Or is this the sort of thing only years of study would help?
It’s more likely than not that your teachers kinda sucked. I found that very little of my English and literature education prior to undergrad taught me much about what literature even is, let alone how to interpret it.
If you’re interested in expanding your mind, there are plenty of resources you can do it with, but it might be best pursued under some sort of tutelage. If you’re particularly self-motivated, you can pick up a book on literary analysis (I recommend The Critical Tradition: Classic Texts and Contemporary Trends) and read about the history of literary criticism and analysis. But be warned—the reading is not easy, and some things will likely go over your head or remain indecipherable. Derrida is a mindbending trip and Lacan doesn’t make much sense to even the most advanced readers on a good day.
Otherwise, I’m sure there are some YouTube classes on literary analysis (see if Crash Course has any!) or find some classes at your local community college!
Honestly, even reading through the Wikipedia pages on literary criticism and literary theory would give you a good starting point. You can start learning about the various approaches and schools of thought, their strengths and weaknesses, and figuring out how you can apply them to the stories in your life. As you dig deeper, you’ll start to see some of the big names cropping up, and if one particularly interests you, there are tons of PDFs that you can find online.
Being able to analyze a piece of writing for authorial intent, conscious and unconscious, intentional and unintentional, is a good skill to have.
That's not even getting into understanding metaphor, simile, and symbolism in writing which can also show the author's intent and how the author views topics.
A fun little example by me:
I was velociraptoring around the kitchen at 2am.
The cheese cried out, but it's pleas fell on deaf ears.
There's a lot that can be interpreted from those 2 sentences. Why was it written? What does it describe? What metaphors are deployed and why? What symbolism is used? Why was symbolism used? How does the writing make you feel? What was the author doing in their kitchen at 2am? How does the author view their actions at 2am? And on, and on, and on the analysis can go. And it only stops when you choose to get off of Mr Bone's Wild Ride.
Now a less fun example is the kind of language someone might deploy when describing a group of people they do not like. How would a fascist report on a crime? A new food bank? The results of a sporting event? The release of a new video game? A new movie? Etc, etc, etc.
Being able to parse media is the biggest defense against being manipulated by propaganda.
So take the time to take a proper gander at the media you see and consume.
EDIT: TLDR Media Literacy is a learned skill that anyone can and should learn and practice.
EDIT2: me seeing the results of praising media literacy in an anti-media literacy thread

Well that, at least, makes sense in that it's really just an exercise in finding evidence for your argument.
Hate to break it to ya bruv, but if that was the reaction, maybe the difference was in the comparative quality of the output ;)
It's the same with music theory and songwriting. You have to know the rules first so you can break them properly.
it will be funny if i become a renowned artist and teachers around the world be talking how deep my lines are when it's stuff like "it didn't took an Hour not a minute not a Second but a microsecond and 10 people were already dead gone reduced to piles of blood and organ on the ground"
also btw that's a line from a tumblr story i wrote on the fly
almost every english teacher in a university/CC, has thier own english writing pet peeve, it annoys the hell out of the students, when there is nothing standardized. One could want you to have a flair in writing fiction thrillers,,,etc and another wants a "literary circle"
If your essay has a line of reasoning that requires more than a room temperature IQ to follow, you get a C. If a text analyzed by the class requires a whole unit, lectures, and discussions to get a line of reasoning, it is genius.
If you're going to the trouble of writing something, my assumption is that you want to communicate. We can only communicate clearly with each other, if we all agree on and use the same word spellings and grammar rules. Otherwise, why bother?
One of the more frustrating things I see daily is titles that don't make it clear whether OP is asking a question, or about to present an explanation.
"Why my dogs throw up in the house" instead of "Why do my dogs throw up in the house*?*"
(I don't know how to italicize the question mark.)

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