[–] 1 point 2 months ago (1 child)

Ah, I see. I think just breaking up the text might work better. Add a panel with the father hunched over with his hands on his knees.. Then the next panel he speaks. Your visuals are so good/expressive I think it would get the point across.

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  • [–] 1 point 2 months ago (3 children)

    Chapter 1

    • Page 3, the use of "huh" is a bit odd here. Usually "huh" is associated with questioning something or uncertainty/not understanding. I think maybe "hey" or "here" might work better?
    • Page 12, typo "congratelate" should be "congratulate"
    • Page 17, the text goes outside the bubble
    • Page 24, there is a typo "envolved" should be "involved"

    I don't normally read these types of comics/stories in this format but your drawing style interested me and I'm intrigued by the story now. Very well done!

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  • [–] 1 point 2 months ago

    Agreed. I initially used AUR since native builds tend to work better but after that whole debacle with malware (thankfully I wasn't affected) I've removed all except a select few and just replaced everything I could with flatpaks. Takes a bit of tweaking for some apps but honestly worth it for peace of mind.

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  • [–] 9 points 2 months ago* (1 child)

    The problem with The Acolyte, from what I've heard and from the clips I've seen, is that it was just a bad show.. They also tried to retcon some characters due to not knowing the material.

    I am with you though... don't understand why they haven't explored TOR for a show... it's by far my favorite era and they have all these characters to choose from due to KOTOR and SWTOR

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