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"The lighter" comic/graphicnovel (thelighter.thecomicseries.com)
submitted 2 months ago by to c/eurographicnovels@piefed.social
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Hi this is my comic, its about late 1800s europe, psychological warfare mixed with witchcraft and folktale. For a better reading experience click scroll view

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[–] 1 point 2 months ago (1 child)

Ah, I see. I think just breaking up the text might work better. Add a panel with the father hunched over with his hands on his knees.. Then the next panel he speaks. Your visuals are so good/expressive I think it would get the point across.

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