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"The lighter" comic/graphicnovel (thelighter.thecomicseries.com)
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Hi this is my comic, its about late 1800s europe, psychological warfare mixed with witchcraft and folktale. For a better reading experience click scroll view

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[–] [S] 1 point 2 months ago* (4 children)

Yea can u tell me what page

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  • [–] 1 point 2 months ago (3 children)

    Chapter 1

    • Page 3, the use of "huh" is a bit odd here. Usually "huh" is associated with questioning something or uncertainty/not understanding. I think maybe "hey" or "here" might work better?
    • Page 12, typo "congratelate" should be "congratulate"
    • Page 17, the text goes outside the bubble
    • Page 24, there is a typo "envolved" should be "involved"

    I don't normally read these types of comics/stories in this format but your drawing style interested me and I'm intrigued by the story now. Very well done!

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  • [–] [S] 1 point 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago) (2 children)

    Much appreciation. For "huh" he was catching his breath (sfx), what do u think i should replace it with?

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