Chapter 1

• Page 3, the use of "huh" is a bit odd here. Usually "huh" is associated with questioning something or uncertainty/not understanding. I think maybe "hey" or "here" might work better?
• Page 12, typo "congratelate" should be "congratulate"
• Page 17, the text goes outside the bubble
• Page 24, there is a typo "envolved" should be "involved"

I don't normally read these types of comics/stories in this format but your drawing style interested me and I'm intrigued by the story now. Very well done!