… Im now invested in what happens next
What were they working on?
What happens over the next 20 seconds?
… Im now invested in what happens next
What were they working on?
What happens over the next 20 seconds?
I love the movie, but my spouse talked me into reading the book and it's an absolute masterpiece. Michael Crichton is to science what Steven king is to scary.
The tongue scene was easily the worst thing I've ever read.
This was the first Crichton novel I read, and it got me into his other works. Most of them have the common theme of:
That formula doesn't really detract from any of his books, but I did laugh when I had read enough of his catalog to see the pattern.
This is a structure even more common than just one author. It needs a name like the hero's journey has. Heck, your summary works for Alien Ressurection!
I nominate "Science goes wrong"
One term is "techno-thriller". See: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Techno-thriller
I can't dive into tvtropes right now, but I've got dollar on someone having coined a term already.
The secret/nefarious science place with a thousand big red buttons?
Have you ever read State of Fear?
I don't really recommend it.
Not to nitpick, but it's only been a single page and I already feel like the author has over used the word "said", is all the dialogue this bad?
Is that when the T-rex brings Dr. Ellie Sattler to a quivering orgasm?
Marginally related but today was having a meeting with someone who is notorious for not being plugged in. I wish I had a recording of it because she literally went "oh sh-" mid sentence and then was booted as her computer shut down. Impeccable timing.
Heh, that's happened a lot since our org updated to Win11. Updates in the middle of the day (despite IT assuring us those only install after hours 🙄) and people just randomly drop from meetings as their PCs reboot. Project manager almost called shenanigans on that until it happened to her mid-meeting.
Today (well, yesterday now), mine was just "Preparing to hibernate due to low battery" and I was like "wait, what?!" and was frantically making sure everything got saved (this old workhorse doesn't always want to resume from hibernate). Turns out I had the cord plugged into the laptop but didn't plug it into the outlet 
I loved Crichton, but goddamned does he over explain tech.
The log was a record of the system over the last few hours.
If readers may not be familiar, he could help them infer that from character actions or dialog.
"Well Wu? What's the log say the system's been doing over the last few hours?", said Arnold
Congo was maybe the worst for techsplaining. Still a great novel!
Wow, it's been near 30 years since I read that. The thing I remember most distinctly is how different the lawyer was between the book and movie.
I think Nedry's death in the book is that for me. The movie version is practically G-rated compared to how it went down in the novel.
First time I ever had to think about the possibility of what would happen with a sizable belly slash.
Never going to un-imagine it.
It was so visceral in the book. I remember watching the movie thinking "oh its about to happen", then it's basically off camera.
I only read the book as an adult on vacation. Thing that stood out to me was the very first scene and going "Oh! Yeah, probably good they didn't put that in the movie."
Hammond also gets a very different ending in the book.
Now I want to read the novel again.
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