My good gentleperson, this is the biggest TL;DR I've ever not read on Lemmy.

If you want people to engage with it at this length, you at minimum need headings (use #, ##, ### for headings), a SUMMARY at the beginning and conclusion at the end, and ideally a table of contents.

What you've currently got is unreadable because there's no structure, nothing to indicate what the point you're trying to make is without reading an enormous post. You need something succinct to draw a reader in.

Vaguely, I'm guessing you're trying to stay: the government is currently dropping the ball so badly people will be desperate enough to consider One Nation?

(Note: I haven't read the whole thing, skimmed bits)

Sorry friend, just being honest.