First chapter of The Last Philosoper: With a capital D

"For every extreme there are infinite in-betweens."
-Boole, extreme logick philosopher

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[–] 4 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago) (2 children)

Starting chapters with epigraphs suggests that there’s something else with which the text is in conversation. (In historical fiction, this could be real historical sources; in scientific works, it could be earlier theories; in parody, it could be quotes from the target.)

In worldbuilding, you could use real-world quotes to imply that your world is in conversation with the actual world; or you could use quotes from fictional in-world sources to imply that your text is part of a larger in-world literary context. But in either case, it draws attention to the idea that the text is constructed, which may or not be what you’re going for.

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  • [–] 4 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

    Not sure what you mean by “the text being constructed” isn’t all text?

    It’s pretty common since movies became popular in the 20th century to write fiction in a way that emulates that cinematic sense of immediacy, by removing anything that foregrounds a distinct narrative voice outside the thoughts and sensations of the protagonist(s). By convention, readers take this style of narration for granted and ignore that it’s still a construction (i.e., the narrator isn’t felt as a conscious presence creating the narrative.)

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  • [–] 2 points 7 months ago

    @NickEast_IndieWriter @reading @books @fantasy @bookstodon @worldbuilding I've only seen it work effectively in a humourous context.

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  • [–] 2 points 7 months ago

    @NickEast_IndieWriter @reading @books @fantasy @bookstodon @worldbuilding I'm reading a book right now that does this. I think it's nice, like a sort of breather or bridge between chapters or maybe to set the mood for the coming.

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  • [–] 2 points 7 months ago

    @NickEast_IndieWriter @reading @books @fantasy @bookstodon @worldbuilding It depends how interesting and/or relevant it is.Dune actually only has quotes (imaginary) separating "chapters".Most of Terry Pratchett's Discworld novels have simple scene breaks and no chapter breaks*. Footnotes are annoying in fiction and eventually Pratchett stopped doing them. They also don't work well (or at all sometimes) in real ebooks as they don't have design-time pages.[* some others seem to lack chapters]

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  • [–] 1 point 7 months ago

    @NickEast_IndieWriter @reading @books @fantasy @bookstodon @worldbuilding I like it. Sets the mood. Maybe sets me on a path to read the work where the quote is from.

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  • [–] 1 point 7 months ago

    @NickEast_IndieWriter @reading @books @fantasy @bookstodon @worldbuilding Oh, and leadins such as small caps or drop caps reduce readibility and accessibility even on paper, They often fail in ebooks.No indent at start of chapter or after scene break, then 1.3em / 16pt indent for regular paragraphs. Only extra space between paragraphs on printed kids books if no indent.

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