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@ originalpoetry Finally Done My journey has been long (valinwolf.com)
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@originalpoetry Finally DoneMy journey has been long.My fever dream is finally over.Done, is the pain and suffering.Yet still I feel stuck in this dream.My feet are still wet with the mud of the path.Is this journey really over; finally over and done?Stuck in the perpetual nightmare.Long is the journey of pain and suffering.Have I made this journey or is this yet a delusion?Nay, my journey is done and gone.Time to shake off the mud from my boots.Leave behind the pain of the past—I’m finally done.

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[–] 1 point 1 year ago

Very nice.

My feet are still wet with the mud of the path is brilliant. Very tactile and love the flow of the sentence

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    [–] 1 point 4 months ago

    Nicely written and uplifting

    Perhaps a conscious decision to be is all that we need for change

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