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What I learnt about back of the pack runners from tail walking an ultra marathon (runningmatters.substack.com)
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[–] 2 points 2 months ago (2 children)

learnt is the correct spelling in British English, the title seems fine?

maybe this will help you:

What I learnt about

  • back of the pack, runners

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  • tail walking, an ultra marathon
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  • [–] 7 points 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago) (1 child)

    Those commas are incorrectly used. Commas are used to separate dependent clauses (if I remember my English classes correctly, it's been a long time).

    "Back of the pack runners" is (I think) a noun phrase, so should be hyphenated to indicate this.

    Same with "tail walking".

    What I learnt about back-of-the-pack runners from tail-walking an ultra marathon

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