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[–] 130 points 6 months ago (7 children)

I'm blinded with rage by the comma he ended his post with,

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  • [–] 46 points 6 months ago* (last edited 6 months ago) (2 children)

    That feels like a valid poetic choice to me, but that “who’s” is getting to me,

    Though tbf, referring to your penis as thirst itself is also pretty poetic

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  • [–] 16 points 6 months ago (3 children)