Meri & Static are at a Cinema after watching a movie, passing by posters for movies like the "Animate Sanity Movie", Static is utterly enraged, saying "They Completely RUINED the Horrid House of Horrors Movie!"  Static, continuing says "It was just a generic kids movie based in the nonsensical town area added in the update!"  Static, still talking, says "The only thing actually from the game was the first monster but it was completely different!" Meri replies saying "So that's why the guy was there"  Static says "This must be Louis' fault!" Meri, visibly confused replies "Who is Louis?"  Comic & Alt Text by @geodes-n-gems.bsky.social on Bluesky & Geodes_n_Gems on Lemmy & Wafrn
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[–] [S] 5 points 7 months ago

Yeah I agree it really feels like my visuals improved a lot, Kinda crazy to think I've come a long way even tho it's not even been a month of comics, that's what happens when you take constructive criticism. I think what I need to tackle now is my lack of a singular gag or joke per comic, now it feels more like a collaboration of several jokes in one comic rather than a build-up to a punchline, I think the closest I get is making a gag and then turning that into a build-up for another joke which maybe works IDK I guess it depends on the gags.

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