It's an appalling non-attempt at communication. She writes like a student given a word count and a thesaurus, and anyone who uses the phrase 'ontological presence' should be slapped with a fish.
Your translation was excellent but even you had to resort to vaguery when it came to "material process of power applied to the body through gender". What power? Applied externally or internally? What is the mechanism that applies the power?
Too many academics (particularly philosophers and art historians) treat their disciplines as an excersise in being as misunderstandable as possible, and there is really no excuse for it. This is technical writing: presise and meaningful word choice is the name of the game. Jargon where appropriate. "prediscursive surface" never.