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[–] 4 points 1 year ago* (7 children)

I feel like that's a question, and not a story. A six word story could be more like: "Gun-handed Dracula shot Van Helsing dead" or, if you count hyphenated words as two words, you could do: "Gun-handed Dracula shot Van Helsing"

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    That got dark quickly. I'm sincerely impressed. Good job.

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  • [–] 2 points 1 year ago (3 children)

    Just a paraphrase of Poe, no credit due to me!

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    Yeah, Jeremiah is what Poe was referencing in terms of his narrator character's desperation to recover from the heartache of his own loss, but it was The Raven that I had in mind, not the prophet in Babylon.

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