Thank you so much—please do let me know what you didn’t like!)

Very good angles and shots—the positioning of the cathedral, in particular, works well. It might be worth refining the fire effects and adding more black tones to the characters.

Thank you—do come back and share any thoughts you might have! 🙇

Thanks for pointing that out!)) Yes, that’s a typo; the previous text template had "2 st" I forgot to put it away .. . 😩

Thank you, I look forward to hearing your opinion )

Ah... you mean the typo. I get it now.))

I'm not a barbarian. I wouldn't make people read everything.))

You can understand Chapter 3 perfectly well without reading the previous ones.

Ahahah ))) 😄

Thanks, I forgot the name of the original.))

Where am I going to find an aquarium like that for her?

Really cool, great aesthetic! The only thing is, I’d remove the medallion on the left collarbone; it looks like a stunted limb, which gives it a satirical vibe. 🖤 🖤 🖤