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This is kind of incoherent @ wikipedia - it's written from an American point of view and doesn't make clear at all what Britain's and France's war ... (mastodon.ie)
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This is kind of incoherent @wikipedia - it's written from an American point of view and doesn't make clear at all what Britain's and France's war was in the first place - it needs an introduction that would précis the whole thing en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anglo-Fr

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[–] 6 points 1 year ago

Bring it up in the edits.

The lead in is very poorly written, the next section "Background" seems fine though.

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    [–] 3 points 1 year ago (1 child)

    The overweight rambling lead is unfortunately a bit of a common problem. I would do something to fix it (this is one of my usual topics) but alas I'm not keen to blow my cover here! It might get a tidy-up if you lobby for it hard enough on the talk page. Alternatively, consider doing it yourself, just make sure to announce your plans first.

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