Are there any consistent flaws with the songs I write, or just anything I could improve on in general?

falling in acid](https://dio-music.bandcamp.com/track/falling-in-acid)
the corpse
chiptune song in d minor

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One useful way to make revision concrete is to give each pass a single goal. Draft the main idea and its contrast first, without editing every line. Then check whether the melody’s stressed notes fit the words, whether each section builds or releases energy, and whether the ending feels deliberate. Compare against a reference in a similar style, choose one specific difference to address, then revise only that element before reviewing the whole song again.

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