I think most people also feel like tough times are coming. But your document resembles an information dump, and it draws on so many ideas that it comes across as incoherent. I don't want to be mean about this, because you've clearly put a lot of work into it. But I think you should distill these ideas into an essay format, because I've kind of got no idea how to process it and I'm sure I'm not the only one.
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