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[–] 1 point 7 months ago (3 children)

I, as an avid reader, have always tried to depend on semicolons; for when sentences have ended but deserve the epilogue.

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  • [–] 1 point 7 months ago (2 children)

    Agreed, but somehow your use of it here still feels off. Like it isn't necessary at all right there; at least that's how I feel. The thing that comes after the semicolon needs to be able to stand on its own. Or use it when counting: Strawberries, blueberries, raspberries; flour, sugar, and cereal; milk, and cream.

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