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[–] 23 points 1 year ago* (2 children)

I feel like the dialogue in the last panel is unnecessary.

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  • [–] 16 points 1 year ago* (1 child)

    I was thinking, funny as it is, it might have worked better as a one-panel vignette (I don't know the cartoonist's usual format, if they always follow this 4-panel square layout) with just panel #4, word balloon included, and the text from panel #1 as a caption.

    Yeah, yeah, everyone's a critic. In any case, it's pretty funny...but not as funny as your face! 🀑

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