@originalpoetry Alone with FriendsSurrounded on all sides.Never without company.Am I not still alone?Home is not in sight,but many leagues away.Friends to the left and right.Alas my mind is not present.Yearning the company of home,not a friend in sight can help.Distance measured in leagues.Is being in company alone?My mind is yet to see that company keeps.Finally I tell my love of my return.Home is where I return.Soon, my love, we shan’t be alone.

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Your word choices reminds me of Tolkien. Not that I would mistake the poem for his, for your styles are different. But the choice of word specifically.

Thanks for posting!

Also your name is a very poet name.

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