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[–] 8 points 1 year ago (4 children)

Its the correct wording for when someone dies while being treated in the hospital. The initial reports were "shot and in critical condition" so now the headline is of course that he ended up dying.

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  • [–] 1 point 1 year ago (2 children)

    That's the whole thing about passive voice, it isn't incorrect. People rightfully criticize passive voice when reporting on police murdering people. Same thing here.

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