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[–] 89 points 1 year ago (8 children)
  • [–] 8 points 1 year ago (6 children)

    Why is "and an attitude" and "and that nasty" crossed out?

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  • [–] 12 points 1 year ago

    I think it just doesn't flow with the rest of the poem. We currently have a president with an attitude and its not great. Also "that nasty hospital food" tonally just don't feel like it fits IMO.

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  • [–] 11 points 1 year ago (4 children)

    I think it suggests that all black women have attitudes and all hospital food is nasty.

    And only one of those is true.

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  • [–] 6 points 1 year ago (2 children)

    Doesnt it more so suggest people with bad teeth have an attitude?

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