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[–] 1 point 1 year ago (1 child)

I uploaded some now slightly-outdated versions of the first few chapters to Royal Road.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/100178/rangers-of-the-frostscape

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  • [–] 1 point 1 year ago

    This is really good

    I like how we can see into the character's head. We get his senses (darkness and snowflakes from his vision, blood on his hands from touch) and his memories (the priest). It makes him very human (Klyskin?). I dig it

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