Not a furry, neither a art critic, but you need work a bit on perspective and shadow contrast, otherwise good job

Nicely drawn and a good start! Shading needs some improvement and her left leg looks amputated in a way that it takes my attention away from what I should be looking at. Looking close into her clothing looks like it isn't attached to her body, or is 2D as her breast is slightly exposed on the underside. Keep up the work though! <3