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[–] 4 points 1 week ago (1 child)

I liked this part "life gradually chipped away, like gaudy gold paint on the amusement rides of his youth"

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  • [–] 4 points 1 week ago

    Thanks, I wrote it myself. I'm a veritable fountain of mental diarrhea. Brain squirts from a leaky communication orifice, like something that rolls down the back of your leg.

    Anyway, to me it kinda looks like he's fishing for his keys while absently contemplating something else.

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