Brutalizing realization  
Ancestors who didn't get it  
Makes me wish I had a bit 'a  
insufflated anesthetic  

Feel OK for just a minute  
Brainspark staccato 'n hectic  
Think my way to have another  
insufflated anesthetic  

Now the candy claws sink deeper  
I can feel it 'n I'll let it  
Burn my sick'nd thoughts with sweeter  
insufflated anesthetic  

It'll kill me 'n I'll let it  
insufflated anesthetic  
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[–] 2 points 4 weeks ago (2 children)

Actually quite like this. Perhaps a bit too akin to death metal lyrics to manys tastes, but that is no barrier for me.

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  • [–] [S] 2 points 4 weeks ago (1 child)

    Thanks! ❤️ I was going for a sonnet with an unrelenting bass line, sort of like the unpleasant compulsive feeling I associate with some drugs. That, and the racing, pounding heartbeat. Death Metal sounds like I hit near the mark. For me, reading back on it, it evokes Daft Punk's "Technologic" more than anything else.

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