Give me feedback you cowards!

I wrote this a little before the climate dread actually got me. Didn't touch it for a while and did some editing over the past day.

I don't like that the poem feels hopelesness, I don't want to sell hopelessness in hopeless times. I eventually recovered from the episode so there is a semi hopeful ending there. I just don't know what to write.

Please tell me what you like, dislike or how it made you feel

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Ah, I get it. I thought they were section titles, and the poem was arranged in a 2x2 grid of subpoems.

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